Term 1 2014 Written Language

WALT write a timed recount about a time when we did something special with our whanau or family.

Write about:

·      when and where you did something special

·      who was with you

·      what you did (think about the order you did things)

·      how you felt and why you felt this way.

By Joshua Owen

We went to Willowbank and it was a really great holiday. We had fizzy at Willowbank and we had been on Halswell trains and I went with Linda and Nana and I have been to the beach before and I have been to the swimming pools and we have not been camping and we have been to the hydro-slide.

Next steps

Try to stick to the topic about visiting Willowbank and write more details to tell about that one event.