WALT write a timed recount about a time
when we did something special with our whanau or family.
Write about:
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when and where you did something special
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who was with you
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what you did (think about the order you did things)
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how you felt and why you felt this way.
By Joshua Owen
We went to
Willowbank and it was a really great holiday. We had fizzy at Willowbank and we
had been on Halswell trains and I went with Linda and Nana and I have been to
the beach before and I have been to the swimming pools and we have not been
camping and we have been to the hydro-slide.
Next
steps
Try to stick to the topic about visiting
Willowbank and write more details to tell about that one event.